Not a fairytale.

Can I just make it clear right now that I am not afraid of criticism?
Honestly.
I am tired of getting things back that say, No revision necessary, in a long scrawl across an end-page. I want to learn too. I'm not there for praise. I am sitting in a hard desk week after week to discover and be told things.

My writing is beginning to feel stagnant.

I am only lively in my painted fairytales.

Criticize me please.